Uchiha Shinji
Konohagakure
Posts: 26 Likes: 0 
Character Name: Shinji Uchiha
Bloodline: Sharingan
Village: Konohagakure
Class: D
Rank: Genin
Skills: Ninjutsu Adept, Genjutsu Novice, 2 Untrained Slots
Elements: Lightning Release
Total Experience: 65
Spending Experience: 5
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Sept 3, 2019 0:08:52 GMT -5
Name: Raiton: Shōgeki-dan
Rank: B-Rank
Classification: Lightning Release, Ninjutsu, Personal
Type: Precise/Multicast
Range: 10 Meters
Hand-Seals: Charge (3)
Description:
Electricity is built up in the fingertips of the user who then makes a gun-like pose with their hands (both middle and index finger extended). From this position "bullets" of electricity may be fired at A-rank speed, but damage at c-rank. These bullets deliver painful shocks at the point of contact and can singe clothing and leave 1st degree burns due to releasing its charge upon impact with any solid object. The resulting impact is enough to parry/redirect small projectiles (kunai/senbon/shuriken) midair, but are non-lethal as they lack the ability to piece flesh because of the discharge upon impact. One or both hands may be used, but only 15 "rounds" in total may be fired before the electrical charge in the user's fingertips is depleted. No hand signs are necessary to initiate the jutsu allowing for a fast draw. Though the user gain's the benefit of a seal-less, quick-draw technique, thin strips of static electricity form around the hand(s) used for a second before firing, signalling the build-up of electricity in that area. The bullets do not have to be used all at one time.
Can fire up to 3 barrages (bursts of 5 bullets) in succession. (costs B-rank Chakra for each one). A-rank Speed/c-rank power.
Drawbacks:
While it's harder to evade, each barrage of bullets can only be focused on one individual.
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Post by Tenshi on Oct 8, 2019 22:45:18 GMT -5
Remove 10 m/s. We don't judge things by meters here.
If it's a Precise Jutsu then the bullets will travel at A rank Speed but only deal C rank Damage (as you sacrifice a rank of power for a rank of speed).
Bullets should be all fired in one burst or this is a multi-cast Jutsu. Meaning you can activate it multiple times for multiple activation costs. The upkeep cost just doesn't make sense given how it works.
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Uchiha Shinji
Konohagakure
Posts: 26 Likes: 0
Character Name: Shinji Uchiha
Bloodline: Sharingan
Village: Konohagakure
Class: D
Rank: Genin
Skills: Ninjutsu Adept, Genjutsu Novice, 2 Untrained Slots
Elements: Lightning Release
Total Experience: 65
Spending Experience: 5
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Oct 8, 2019 23:26:34 GMT -5
Okay, I removed the m/s thing. But, I'm confused, I would rather it still retain the ability to shoot it at different rates of fire and not always all in one burst. So, I guess my question is how can we make the upkeep cost make sense?
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Uchiha Shinji
Konohagakure
Posts: 26 Likes: 0
Character Name: Shinji Uchiha
Bloodline: Sharingan
Village: Konohagakure
Class: D
Rank: Genin
Skills: Ninjutsu Adept, Genjutsu Novice, 2 Untrained Slots
Elements: Lightning Release
Total Experience: 65
Spending Experience: 5
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Oct 22, 2019 17:09:46 GMT -5
Fixed.
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Post by Tenshi on Oct 25, 2019 15:38:22 GMT -5
Name: Raiton: Shōgeki-dan
Rank: B-Rank
Classification: Lightning Release, Ninjutsu, Personal
Type: Precise/Multicast
Range: 10 Meters
Hand-Seals: 3 Second Charge Time
Description:
Electricity is built up in the fingertips of the user who then makes a gun-like pose with their hands (both middle and index finger extended). From this position "bullets" of electricity may be fired at A-rank speed, but damage at c-rank. These bullets deliver painful shocks at the point of contact and can singe clothing and leave 1st degree burns due to releasing its charge upon impact with any solid object. The resulting impact is enough to parry/redirect small projectiles (kunai/senbon/shuriken) midair, but are non-lethal as they lack the ability to piece flesh because of the discharge upon impact. One or both hands may be used, but only 15 "rounds" in total may be fired before the electrical charge in the user's fingertips is depleted. No hand signs are necessary to initiate the jutsu allowing for a fast draw. Though the user gain's the benefit of a seal-less, quick-draw technique, thin strips of static electricity form around the hand(s) used for a second before firing, signalling the build-up of electricity in that area. The bullets do not have to be used all at one time.
Can fire up to 3 barrages (bursts of 5 bullets) in succession. (costs B-rank Chakra for each one). A-rank Speed/c-rank power.
Drawbacks:
While it's harder to evade, each barrage of bullets can only be focused on one individual.
Jutsu is fine, but change 3 seconds charge to Charge (3). Charge is based off hand-seal equivalency not seconds (as time is not calculated in this game). So if it's a Charge 3 then the amount of time it takes you to charge would be equal to someone using 3 hand seals for their jutsu. Once you put that in I think this jutsu is good to go. |
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Uchiha Shinji
Konohagakure
Posts: 26 Likes: 0
Character Name: Shinji Uchiha
Bloodline: Sharingan
Village: Konohagakure
Class: D
Rank: Genin
Skills: Ninjutsu Adept, Genjutsu Novice, 2 Untrained Slots
Elements: Lightning Release
Total Experience: 65
Spending Experience: 5
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Post by Uchiha Shinji on Oct 25, 2019 23:44:43 GMT -5
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Post by Tenshi on Nov 14, 2019 15:42:12 GMT -5
Name: Raiton: Shōgeki-dan
Rank: B-Rank
Classification: Lightning Release, Ninjutsu, Personal
Type: Precise/Multicast
Range: 10 Meters
Hand-Seals: Charge (3)
Description:
Electricity is built up in the fingertips of the user who then makes a gun-like pose with their hands (both middle and index finger extended). From this position "bullets" of electricity may be fired at A-rank speed, but damage at c-rank. These bullets deliver painful shocks at the point of contact and can singe clothing and leave 1st degree burns due to releasing its charge upon impact with any solid object. The resulting impact is enough to parry/redirect small projectiles (kunai/senbon/shuriken) midair, but are non-lethal as they lack the ability to piece flesh because of the discharge upon impact. One or both hands may be used, but only 15 "rounds" in total may be fired before the electrical charge in the user's fingertips is depleted. No hand signs are necessary to initiate the jutsu allowing for a fast draw. Though the user gain's the benefit of a seal-less, quick-draw technique, thin strips of static electricity form around the hand(s) used for a second before firing, signalling the build-up of electricity in that area. The bullets do not have to be used all at one time.
Can fire up to 3 barrages (bursts of 5 bullets) in succession. (costs B-rank Chakra for each one). A-rank Speed/c-rank power.
Drawbacks:
While it's harder to evade, each barrage of bullets can only be focused on one individual.
Approved. Each set of five is one jutsu/one attack. That means if it hits it deals 1 c rank, not 5. It's essentially hit or miss. |
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